Review Detail of ILoveChaos in In Marvel as Superman
Review detail
Writing Quality - 3 Story Development - 2, Ancient One's puppet and cliche school drama. Character Design- 2, No conversations no nothing. How am I supposed to rate this? He's barely had any interactions in 10-11 chs. He also cries for every little thing. Updating Stability- I don't know about this Since it already has 30-40 chs So ill just give it a 5. World Background- Trash. Decide if it's DC or Marvel first.
In Marvel as Superman
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Ofc maybe he did clear it but for me I couldn't get past 17. Clears it all at 40? sure but not everyone has the patience to grill themselves through something they don't like.
Genn_stars:plus, at chapter 40 you should have rather clear most of things you talked about so it's quite obvious you didn't pay attention on what you were reading IF you read at all that is
3 Chapters all it takes to bored me out, pace too fast, MC with no plan. He does whatever thought pop out of his head. It feels like the story will end in a dozen chaps.
ILoveChaos:Ofc maybe he did clear it but for me I couldn't get past 17. Clears it all at 40? sure but not everyone has the patience to grill themselves through something they don't like.
That's exactly what I mean. Atleast I read 17 whole chapters before reviewing. The other guy really thinks I should've went through 30 more chapters of nonsense smh
Nero_K_Cagliostro:3 Chapters all it takes to bored me out, pace too fast, MC with no plan. He does whatever thought pop out of his head. It feels like the story will end in a dozen chaps.
Im not sure what you mean, since I'm now in the 100's of chapters, but I will say that I wasn't bored at the begining, so I don't understand how you were...
ILoveChaos:That's exactly what I mean. Atleast I read 17 whole chapters before reviewing. The other guy really thinks I should've went through 30 more chapters of nonsense smh
GrymAbyss:Im not sure what you mean, since I'm now in the 100's of chapters, but I will say that I wasn't bored at the begining, so I don't understand how you were...
okyo:idk man maybe cuz everyone has different taste. have you ever thought of that?
I think the dude was agreeing with you lol What he meant is while everyone has different tastes there's also how everyone's understanding of the language is different too. So while for some the wrong sentence structures,tones, uses of words or grammar might not be a much of a problem, since they themselves do not know much about the language so it seems okayish to them. But the same thing would be a massive turnoff to guys who are very familiar with English and it's rules, and they expect the same thing from the author. So that's what I think he was implying by at what level of English you are P.S. this ain't my thought process, just tried to state what the guy was implying. And yeah his use of english wasn't good too lol. P.P.S And no, I think people can still read through a little bad english if they found the other factors to their liking. Or they are MTL readers lol, those guys can read anything. P.P.P.S Just found funny since its seems like 'okyo' thought the guy was gunning for him so he replied with derision, all while the innocent dude was agreeing with him through his broken english. Don't mind me my sense of humour is broken.
okyo:"there's at what level" maybe next time try to write something that makes sense before replying.
