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WoofWoof
WoofWoofLv62yrWoofWoof

grammar is awful, punctuations are lacking, spelling errors are as abundant as a field of flowers. some cringy moments .

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Stacking My Abilities

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SomePerson
SomePersonLv3SomePerson

Grammar is definitely something that makes a story bad. Grammar is what allows authors to express ideas clearly. And racism is not a flaw either. Authors frequently create a world where some characters are racist, that doesn't make a story bad or the author racist. Of course racism on the author's part is definitely something that detracts from the story. I agree with your other points though.

Saad_Yousuf:having bad grammars isn't a flaw .ask those countless readers who read MLT .let me tell you about some flaws like racism, over the top nationalism,mc who talk to himself all the time,stupid author who doesn't want to add new character and make the the mc fight the same character again and again,main character who always search for new harem etc.
Saad_Yousuf
Saad_YousufLv4Saad_Yousuf

nobody cares bro.if you wanna read good books you have to bear with it

SomePerson
SomePersonLv3SomePerson

How does having these flaws make it a good book?

Saad_Yousuf:nobody cares bro.if you wanna read good books you have to bear with it
Saad_Yousuf
Saad_YousufLv4Saad_Yousuf

having bad grammars isn't a flaw .ask those countless readers who read MLT .let me tell you about some flaws like racism, over the top nationalism,mc who talk to himself all the time,stupid author who doesn't want to add new character and make the the mc fight the same character again and again,main character who always search for new harem etc.

SomePerson:How does having these flaws make it a good book?
Saad_Yousuf
Saad_YousufLv4Saad_Yousuf

of the countless flaws I said racism is if not the biggest one. Sure in a novel racist people can exist.in real there's all kinds of racist people.its ok if other's are racist but it's not okif the main character in the novel is a racist and all the so called "righteous" people are racist than the novel in itself becomes a racist novel.

SomePerson:Grammar is definitely something that makes a story bad. Grammar is what allows authors to express ideas clearly. And racism is not a flaw either. Authors frequently create a world where some characters are racist, that doesn't make a story bad or the author racist. Of course racism on the author's part is definitely something that detracts from the story. I agree with your other points though.
Saad_Yousuf
Saad_YousufLv4Saad_Yousuf

and if you haven't read novels of such quality than congratulations you didn't have any experience with a cliche mixed and emotional drama filled novel

Demonmaster
DemonmasterLv3Demonmaster

When you write with no capitalization and made a three word sentence, I have no idea if what you wrote is true or not.