This book started off with a bang! As the story develops, it maintains the high energy and pacing introduced in chapter one. I only suggest that the author keep a consistent dialogue form in chapter two (I suggest using only quotation marks as you did in every chapter forthwith) I can’t wait to see how the flames continue to grow!

The story is well-written and the plot is interesting and offers a rather unique premise. Instead of ghost story as the title say, it is more like mystery story. (Not complaining though) Characters are well described. There are not many grammatical mistakes. Even though there are some, but it's easy to understand. In the end, this work has a great potential. So, I totally recommend this book to everyone.

Quite an interesting read indeed, I didn't even know when I reached last chapter, Conversations, characters everything is too good. waiting for more

The book has an interesting start and it is really nice how the author develops the characters dialogues in a way that is understandable and easy to read. So far so good, keep it up author 👌👌

A recommended read! It has that nice steady build up that leads to a great climax which have you wondering if there are more. I like how the characters are not centered on the protagonist alone, and the moments of his teammates does not lose to his. I only hate the part where the author comments the possible dropping of the story. I hope author continues more of it.

Hmm. Review Proper after reading the latest chapter 12... Writing quality. There are a few grammatical errors but not to the point it hinders your reading. The narratives and dialogues are easy to read too. Stability of Updates. The author has a stable update weekly so far. Story Development. I found it a rather slow pace. But that is understandable since for the first chaps the characters are still getting to know each other. Character Design. The author describes them well. There was also something that set their personalities apart from each other. World Background. Set in modern-day Earth. But still, it is clearly written well. Overall the story has a good and intriguing plot. Keep it up, author!

Lonewolf, if this is really your first story, then you're are extremely talented. This story is intriguing. Everything from character design, writing quality, world background and updating stability is on point. Keep going, and the sky will be the limit for you. Some days are gold and some days are stones. You said it yourself, "Even the weather cries"

This book is very interesting to read, it kept me moving from chapter to chapter without stopping. The characters, plot, and different settings are very well developed. Please continue your good work.

first of all, I love your book cover since Fubuki from one punch man is there. She is my waifu so, points for you hahaha joke. Next, the title... I thought it would be horror but it's like a mystery novel. The synopsis is great, it's really interesting, this is pretty interesting and good but in the chapters, you used *smile* instead of using the " *smiles* " You can just use, "She started smiling," "She smiled" or anything that it could describe that person smiling. There is still a lot more to improve but that is part of life and you have potential. Keep writing!