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Lonewo1f

Lonewo1f

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Here to bring my imaginations come alive through words. A lazy guy who loves to sketch and sing. And, also to write in my free time. Do check out my novel - Ghost Busters :-P

2019-05-03 JoinedIndia
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  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f3 years ago
    Replied to Lonewo1f

    *doubts

  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f3 years ago
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter. I have some doubt regarding contracts brother. This isn't the right place to ask but I'll ask anyway. I applied for webnovel non-exclusive contract and they have accepted it. They were offering the royalty contract but I rejected it. Should I accept their non-exclusive contract?

  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f3 years ago
    Posted

    What a great work. I hardly have 5 or 6 books in my library. And, I think this will gonna stay for long. Loved the writing style a lot (found some errors but can be fixed during proofreading). I have read 16 chapters right now. And, I already knew this is going to be a great work. Keep it up author!

  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f3 years ago
    Replied to d_nmalory

    Thanks a lot! ✨

  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f3 years ago
    Posted

    A great read indeed. I liked the cover. It's simple yet very eye catching. The story's pace is good for now. I don't think it's rushing or have a slow pace. I saw some tenses off the bats here and there. As for grammar I didn't find any errors for now (maybe a few). Overall, a nice read.

  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f3 years ago
    Replied to BlueBlueLemon

    Thanks a lot mate! This is my first work. I hope, it will get recognized. ✨

  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f3 years ago
    Replied to Kandpalbhaskar010

    Anytime bro! Synopsis plays a vital role. Keep it as interesting as you can. ✨

  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f3 years ago
    Posted

    This is my honest opinion after reading few chapters. The concept is good. Not the best but surely good because of the pair ~ Ashton and Matt. The conversations are funny between them and one can enjoy while reading. Parallelly, the author also tries to induce the world details in between and the character's growth too as the chapters proceeds. The author has a nice way to show interactions. They are flowy, engaging, and are filled with enough humor. Overall, it was a nice read. Cons (According to me): I couldn't read the synopsis. It was preventing me from reading your work. A synopsis must contain vital details and should be very intriguing cause this is the deciding factor that will make readers whether they want to read or not. And, when I saw the synopsis, I almost dropped your work. Secondly, grammatical errors. I found many of them. I can ignore the punctuations but errors in grammar are a bit too much. So, those need to be fixed. Keep up the good work!! This work has potential. You just need to fix some things and you are good to go.

  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f3 years ago
    Replied to Kandpalbhaskar010

    Hey, thanks a lot. It's based on ghosts only. You'll have to read more to understand the plot.

  • Lonewo1f
    Lonewo1f3 years ago
    Posted

    This is good. The writing quality is great. I can't say much about it since it only has 4 chapters. But, those 4 chapters are good enough to keep you hooked. I did find some tense problems in the first chapter. Other than that, it's going smooth for now. Keep it up!!

Ghost Busters

A guy going by the name of Felix joins the team known as 'Ghost Busters' because of an invitation. A team consisting of 6 members. Nobody knew his past, nor his personal info. Even his name Felix was an alias created by himself. What was about to come? Was the decision to invite him was correct or everything will crumble? Felix embarks on his journey along with his new team to unveil the secrets and mysteries of the world, including his own past too. However, there was another secret to it. Something related to him. Something which defied the laws. Join Felix on his journey to explore the eerie, unreal, and perilous side of the world as he uncovers the mysteries one by one. *** Author's note : Hello Everyone! Lonewolf here. This will be my first novel here. So, please bear that in mind. Also, English is not my first language and I'm not a writer by profession. Constructive criticism, appreciation, and suggestions are welcomed. I'll do my best to put all my efforts into augmenting my vocabulary to be as expressive as I can. So, please do support me. If you find this entertaining then do show your love by voting this and adding it to your library. Thank you ~ [Warning: This novel doesn't promote any kind of practices shown in this to be executed in real life. This novel is a work of fiction. The characters in this novel are purely based on my imagination. Any resemblance to actual events, locals, or persons, living or dead is coincidental.]

Lonewo1f · Urban
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14 Chs