Got really into your stories recently so here’s another review lol. Writing quality: 5/5 There’s little to no grammar mistakes and they’re not really noticeable. The characters personalities are gone into depth as well and the interactions are interesting to read. Updating Stability: 5/5 In all honestly I don’t really know lol. Haven’t been reading this fic until just recently but it seems pretty good. Story development: 5/5 Honestly a breath of fresh air in comparison to the other mha fics. Author’s not afraid to take the story in a completely different direction form the original which is great. Character Design: 5/5 The characters are portrayed like they should be and the mc’s personality is fun to read. World background: 5/5 Pretty good so far though it has a few inconsistencies but they can be easily ignored. So stop reading this review and just read the fic already.

Its honestly a really good story mc stays pretty consistent, considering its webnovel the author has really good grammar. You can tell that the characters at least resemble the originals. Toga was the first confirmed love interest and Toga is one of my favorite anime girls so I was biased but I didn't feel repulsed by the grammar like many fanfics on this site. It's just something about Chinese writers and some stories with a lack of writing experience that irks me be it the descriptions or just the dialogue. Overall this story is worth a read and this is saying something due to the fact of the matter is I've only ever given put 3 reviews. But keep in mind if you do not like your favorite characters dying do not read. That's really it he does the whole villain thing well and if he gets the romance written properly I'd say it is perfection. And to everyone who says villains can't fall in love with someone or be emotionally attached that's quite false the only way for that to be true would be a mental illness known as I believe sociopathy or psychopathy. I get the two mixed up one of them your born with the other can be gained. I do believe it is sociopathy that is the correct terminology. Anyways wonderful job I gotta go before my readers yell at me I truly look forward to what you do with the story seeya later.

Finally something new! Never seen a fanfic of this character. ......................................................................................

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Dammmm i was expecting another generic villan mc but NAH my man is ruthless i wont spoil it but cannon is seriously altered by the mc by chapter 6

I recommend this, you don't see a lot of MHA fan-fictions where the mc tries to kill the main characters of the show, also we get to see the Pov of different people along the way. The writing Quality pretty good and the author claims English his 3rd language but I barely see any writing mistakes, but that's just me. The Story Development following cannon but pretty sure the author said it's an AU mha world, so don't expect everything going to Cannon. Overall I recommend this cause it's not all sunshine and rainbows, it's more realistic than the Mha Cannon we know, that's why I recommend this way more realistic than the original...

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Alright, honest review, 5/5. Writing Quality 5: Who doesn’t like the cliche trope of being reincarnated into a fiction world? But in all honesty, I’m confused, what’s his goal, immorality? Escaping All For One’s grasp? It hasn’t shown up yet…. I think. But I’ll give you the benefit of doubt. I can also understand what I am reading, I can see the characters personality, and that gave this story a 5 in this category. Updating Stability 5: This story has only 6 chapters on it, but it seems consistent, I’ll review this story later on. Story Development 5: Again, this story is only in its early stage, so I’ll update this when it gets spicy. Character Design 5: I mean… it’s the original characters so unless author add an OC, I’m not changing this. World Backround 5: Like the last, it’s MHA’s world, or at least a version of it, since this is an AU.

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