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Review Detail of Spelloyal in His Majesty, The King (HIATUS)

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The idea of the fic is interesting, basically we have a mc who inherited the powers of a god who is a mix of Jin Mori and the Jade Emperor. The problem comes with some pretty big plot errors, like the mc being assigned to team 8 even without scouting skills, and the mc blatantly using his powers while making up bad excuses that should be discovered instantly (like saying that used chakra strings when there is a Byakugan user on the team) Maybe if the author had chosen a smaller fandom I would have continued reading, but with thousands of naruto fanfics out there it's just not worth reading this one when the author besides being a novice lacks knowledge about Naruto.

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His Majesty, The King (HIATUS)

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