Review Detail of ForThe_Lolzs in His Majesty, The King (HIATUS)

The fic is rather good I'll say that much. The pacing is alright (Though I would like to see it slow down a bit) the main character is likable and isn't bland, and he already has a goal so that's nice. the powers of the protagonist are cool too. The only real issues I have is I'd like to see a lot more detail in writing when describing something beyond the protagonist and the supporting cast.