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I hate this story, let's be honest, if you found out your newborn child was possessed by the soul of an adult, you would throw it in a river, I would. There is no way anyone would be that sympathetic, especially since the "child" killed your daughter. But I can't give you a bad grade, I don't like what you did, but that doesn't mean it's a bad story. Thanks for the chapters

Of all the novels of the naruto world. This novel is what gives the nuances of life, with each story containing emotion. Good novels. ............................................... ...............................................

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Great story Interesting developments so far, has been a real fun read Excellent writing quality and length, has been a joy to read compared to 99% of other fanfiction on this site Character feel very real and fleshed out Overall a great experience and would highly recommend.

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