Item: An Uchiha's Rise
Rating: 5
Author: 3PoundsOfRice

3PoundsOfRiceLv53yr

2021-06-09 03:55

I hate this story, let's be honest, if you found out your newborn child was possessed by the soul of an adult, you would throw it in a river, I would. There is no way anyone would be that sympathetic, especially since the "child" killed your daughter. But I can't give you a bad grade, I don't like what you did, but that doesn't mean it's a bad story. Thanks for the chapters

An Uchiha's Rise

Riklent

4.9

25 Chs

Liked by 19 people

Replies6

RiklentAuthor

Hmmm thanks for the review, I respect and understand your opinion. My view on it while I was writing was that his doubt stemmed from that the child might have had malicious intent towards him and so, when he checked on the child's intentions, he understood that all the child wanted from him was affection and that the child was equally as confused as him. This is what caused him to feel so much guilt as he threw away the position that his daughter entrusted him to for his doubt. The easiest way to provide affection to a baby was to do as he was supposed in the first place. Act like a father to him.

3yr

FadeKnightLv2

it's the cardinal rule of reincarnation stories. I've never read a story where it ended up making it better. Ever.

Riklent:Hmmm thanks for the review, I respect and understand your opinion. My view on it while I was writing was that his doubt stemmed from that the child might have had malicious intent towards him and so, when he checked on the child's intentions, he understood that all the child wanted from him was affection and that the child was equally as confused as him. This is what caused him to feel so much guilt as he threw away the position that his daughter entrusted him to for his doubt. The easiest way to provide affection to a baby was to do as he was supposed in the first place. Act like a father to him.

3yr

RiklentAuthor

what do you mean?

FadeKnight:it's the cardinal rule of reincarnation stories. I've never read a story where it ended up making it better. Ever.

3yr

LittleVampLv4

Means you handled it very well even while breaching a 'tabboo' of reincarnation fics. 👍

Riklent:what do you mean?

3yr

jats2004Lv15

quick question. then what makes this a good story worthy of giving 5 stars even though you hate some parts of the ff ? havent read this ff yet

3yr

3PoundsOfRiceLv5

It has a good premise, decent writing and some relationships develop in a decent way. The rating is for a fanfic, if it was a story that was taken seriously or published by a publisher I would give it 1, don't take reviews too seriously. I only rate with the rating standards.

jats2004:quick question. then what makes this a good story worthy of giving 5 stars even though you hate some parts of the ff ? havent read this ff yet

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