Review Detail of Carrottop in Mass Effect SI: Ultimate Krogan

I'll very confused....why is this not trending more? This is clearly one of the better quality fanfictions on this site with an MC that is not completely one-dimensional. My only hope is that the author lays off a bit from the game jargon and weapon worship and let the MC expand a bit of his business acumen to further the development of his species as a civilization with a reputation beyond brainless brutes. Food for thought dear author-sama.