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2021-10-07 19:36

incredibly funny and equally fked up. It's a real joy to read and has very little errors. It's oddly hard to find this story in the rankings despite its popularity. Anyway I just wish there was some closure for the mass effect arc like some POV chapters for the characters that are left behind like space mama.

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JManM
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Thanks for the review. I feel you on the desire to tie off the characters. I will spend some time thinking on how to do that.

Oleem
OleemLv6

yo thanks for writing the mass effect closure chapter. None of the other worlds really needed it as much as the first one.

JManM:Thanks for the review. I feel you on the desire to tie off the characters. I will spend some time thinking on how to do that.
JManM
JManMAuthor

Your welcome, dawg. It was fun to show the things he missed out on snd his priorities. Even dead he wanted to let Jacob know how much he sucks.

Oleem:yo thanks for writing the mass effect closure chapter. None of the other worlds really needed it as much as the first one.
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