I love the interesting PoV. It’s rare to find well-structured books with a 2nd PoV, but this author has managed to captivate me successfully. However, I would suggest for the author to utilise the show-not-tell technique more often. Otherwise, I do have to admit I have fallen in love with Rin, Daisuke, and Paris, and I found chapter 10 rather romantic to read. Would I stick around for chapter 11? Definitely.
Mary Algen Guiang
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LIKEthank you for the honest review. please check out my other book too, the title is "Bewitching Illusions". I will appreciate greatly if you leave a comment to that as well. the other book uses the traditional 3rd person and 1st person pov, I am trying to compare readers' responses to both. ♥♥♥ thank you so much for your time. and thank you for leaving us with a review. Arigato gozaimasu! ♥