A11urea
A poet dredged up from harsh and humble beginnings. Evolving slowly into a playwright. Always do we underestimate lessons taught to us, But it is important to remember them,
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A11urea2yrReplied to Ava_Smith_3039Ch 1 Revenge with a dash of tainted love- A11urea2yrReplied to Itx_Mahi
- A11urea2yrReplied to Typhlix
😂Oh yes.
[You]: No? But it was js a joke! I swear on my life! - A11urea2yrReplied to Typhlix
The more you enjoy yourself the faster time flies
Only thing left to do now is to soldier through the last few months - A11urea2yrReplied to Typhlix
I know... just a few more decades...
Only thing left to do now is to soldier through the last few months - A11urea2yrReplied to TyphlixCh 1 [SoM] | This is just a chatroom | *NSFW* <1>
- A11urea2yrPosted
I love the interesting PoV. It’s rare to find well-structured books with a 2nd PoV, but this author has managed to captivate me successfully. However, I would suggest for the author to utilise the show-not-tell technique more often. Otherwise, I do have to admit I have fallen in love with Rin, Daisuke, and Paris, and I found chapter 10 rather romantic to read. Would I stick around for chapter 11? Definitely.
- A11urea2yrReplied to Bk1010
- A11urea2yrReplied to Mr_Loser
😏😏😏
As the eldest child, I was—according to the old court edicts, the legitimate heiress to the throne, the Tsesarevna—regardless of gender. I couldn't possibly let males get in the way of my rightful rule, could I? I needed to remove those who stood in my way—for the moment, if not permanently, and help those of use to me if—no, when I reigned. I saw clearly in my mind's eye, who the obstacles were, and I had to find a way to get rid of them, starting with Tsarevich Andrei. - A11urea2yrReplied to Mr_Loser
Pavlova cakes actually do exist lol :D Besides, it's a fictional world. Anything can happen, eh? :)
I grabbed the tray and dumped it on the bed, grabbing a Pavlova cake from the tray and pouring tea into my mouth right after. I sat on the edge of my bed and sighed sadly. Didn't anyone care about me? No one, except good Peter, the manservant, came to visit. I didn't even get visits from female servants at all, and I had to do pretty much everything myself the moment I knew how to speak and write. I finished the delicacies within minutes and left the tea on the bedside table to cool, as I continued to stand at the window. - A11urea2yrPosted
The plotline is good and the characters are very… unusual. The author needs to watch out for minor spelling errors, preposition issues and slightly improper tense usage, however [basically grammatical errors in general]. If you haven’t already, I would suggest getting someone else to proofread your work, so that you can be sure your work is with as few mistakes as possible [or you can take the time to read your story from the first chapter to the latest each time you post a new chapter, so that you can be sure your story flows smoothly WITH as few mistakes as possible in between]. Keep up the good work, author! P.S I love the plot twist in Chapter 2; thought it was gonna be a normal transmigration story~
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So Izekiel punched Eugene's fist?
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It'd be nicer if you showed Eugene is the male lead character instead of outright saying it. I don't like this paragraph, tbh
Eugene stood straight, his body was exhausted but being the male lead character, his will was still unbroken. With a small triumphant smile he said, - A11urea2yrPosted
I love the characters [although I can't say I agree with their characters], and I do love the world background. But if I have to be harsh, the way the king speaks and the way Harrison speaks is a bit too... casual and unbefitting a subject. It just doesn't fit the mood; I would suggest the author to make the king's words more formal and Harrison's words and expressions more respectful. The author also has to watch out for improper word usage and grammatical errors i.e. tense errors. Otherwise, the plotline seems very sound thus far. Keep going, author!
- A11urea2yrReplied to Kookie_Gee
*smirks*
I gave a suppressed sigh. "Enough. Begone, and do your duties well, Peter." I waved him away. - A11urea2yrReplied to tanu_sam
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As the eldest child, I was—according to the old court edicts, the legitimate heiress to the throne, the Tsesarevna—regardless of gender. I couldn't possibly let males get in the way of my rightful rule, could I? I needed to remove those who stood in my way—for the moment, if not permanently, and help those of use to me if—no, when I reigned. I saw clearly in my mind's eye, who the obstacles were, and I had to find a way to get rid of them, starting with Tsarevich Andrei. - A11urea2yrReplied to Bk1010
I shoulda made her 2.1m~
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