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humas_arereal
humas_arerealLv23yrhumas_arereal

i dislike the writing style in the earlier chapters of the book and i dislike it for the sole reason it feels more like your reading someone roleplaying rather than a book with thoroughly explained concepts making you feel like your inside the book, due to the fact it's written like that i can't actually imagine or find the drive to continue reading i stopped early in the book for the way actions were described it'll probably be better later but i can't find the will to read anymore

The Cheat Seed

Sinadin

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Sinadin
SinadinLv3Sinadin

Ah..Its Okay. I'm sorry, I am an Amateur and I've been trying to improve everyday. Thank you for your views on my work.

OVERKILL
OVERKILLLv13OVERKILL

I'm stuck at chapter 1 and couldn't finish it. not gonna give my review until i read some chapters...

Sinadin
SinadinLv3Sinadin

Yes please

OVERKILL:I'm stuck at chapter 1 and couldn't finish it. not gonna give my review until i read some chapters...