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2022-04-27 04:15

This hidden gem, need more readers Good: -Unique novel i dare to say the novel build new genre... why risk yourself fighting them if you can defeat enemies by stealing them? their fate is worse. than death to them!! i myself get tired from all this alike novels Transmigration, Reincarnation, Sexual Cultivation. -Nice MC grow over the story the story begin with coward MC and inexperienced which is understandable because how young he was, eleven i guess? he will get better as he grow Bad: -Harem Sadly most What's lack the novel, only one girl (that was confirmed mutual love) and she will not around for unknown time... -worldbuilding The continent of first book was kinda boring. Hopefully the second book fix this two.

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