It's a story of a boy who was force to become a thief but after becoming one he finds out that a thief is more honorable than a normal two-faced cultivator. So please read it and let me know how you guys think about it. Thanks..!

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New Concept of Cultivation and System is always appreciated. WRITING QUALITY--- One of the in my collection!😁 STORY DEVELOPMENT--- Very Good pace and there are many Plot twists as we move further. 😃 CHARACTER DESIGN--- This is one of Best Asset of this Story.😣 UPDATING STABILITY--- It is Regular and Timely. ☺️ WORLD BACKGROUND--- Very Nicely arranged and described.(also my favourite) It is not like those Complicated Ones and It is quite easy to understand this one.😘 ADVISE--- [READ IT NOW BECAUSE IT IS WORTH IT] 😎

The premise is great. The whole idea of a boy opposing heaven and stealing from it is also quite fun. The problem lies in its execution. The grammar and flow are all over the place with little to no flow. It makes reading a struggle completely pulling you out of the novel's world and stopping you from getting immersed. Flow is unfortunately a concept in writing that takes time to perfect even for native English speakers so it is just something that the author requires more practise at.

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A book in the more unknown corners of Webnovel Eternal Thief starts leaving a decent impression on me starting with a very typical start of a cultivation novel that doesn't lean too hard into "HOW DARE YOU TRASH" tropes that Chinese novels tend to start with to try and build motivation for the reader. No, this novel gives you decent story and context for the reader to start becoming invested with the looming idea that the system is coming. The system does arrive with fanfare but the mc is hesitant to accept the cursed power at first showing some actual character. It has easy to understand themes of thievery and despair strewn throughout never asking the reader to deeply invest himself in the story but throws enough out there to keep me interested in it. The world is also rather interesting for a cultivation novel showing the humility to not have humans be ranked #1 in power and building a fully believable world filled to the brim with greedy humans vying to take the #1 in power. The weakest aspects of this story are the author's rare spelling mistakes of certain words like Warrior which he spells as Worrier and also the weakness of the character of the female lead it's not that her motivations aren't explained it's just the author doesn't introduce it the right way (mostly too fast and too reliant on hormones lol) to get me invested in the female lead beyond her attributes (looks, personality, etc.) but these are minor and I have built up a tolerance to this in lew of the things I like about it. Overall I am proud of this author for being able to hit a good bar for his first story

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When I See Name Of Novel I think The Novel Is About Thief Doing His Thief Thing Out Smart The Item Owner But Mc Have To Be Hero He is A thief But Morality Of A Hero And Plot Armor Is So Strong If Not He Should Die in First -Ten Chapter

1st mission: “Penalty for failure: Death” The story is great but the author really has no idea how to create tension. Every single character will be railroaded into a forced path and there will be no decission making, you will always know what will happen next. However it is at least an decently interesting path. Great story and concept. But the author just never leaves any possibility for alternate paths or ”what if” questions. Anything important was always going to happen the exact way it happened because the author only left one path for the story to continue.