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star_dreamer
star_dreamerLv33yr
2021-06-09 18:32

Though I don't normally read system stories, this one was quite good. There was an energetic feel in the words as they properly describe each scenario and gave proper justice to the intriguing characters. From the first line I was hooked and kept reading. My only question is- can the system be made more inclusive and realistic in the story. I mean, I haven't much experience in system type stories, but I think those parts seemed a bit too artificial. (Just my humble opinion, what I felt while reading the story.) This doesn't have to be necessarily the case for everyone. Anyways, good-luck with this story author. I'll return once there are more chapters.

The Superpower System

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BlueJuice_Man
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wow what a story! this book is so unique and I have loved reading it so much! everyone should at least try reading this bc of how smooth the reading experience is(:

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Venusean
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I always appreciate a smooth writing experience as aided by the author's skill and this is one of those. The grammar has so far been flawless and other than some very very very slight formatting mistakes that were corrected by the author, I have not picked up any flaw in the writing quality. Plot is interesting and has a lot of potential. The character(s)is well-written and developped. The world background hasn't been brought up too much yet but I predict it will also be 5 stars from me. Good work, keep it up!

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Mel_Aniv
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The chapters are really long, like really2x long. Praise be the book cover! I like it. Anyways, the author was good at choosing words and it was like a play. I must say that the mastery of the language is one of his perks. I can see that the narration was smooth. I like it ❤️ Hope you can make the chapters thinner like 1.5k words as an average per chap haha 😂 Anyways, still up to you. The readers need a short break per chap too ❤️

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ObamaUchiha
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please update again.... even just once a month is good even ever 2 months just please. .......................................................

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Lutheris_right
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Now this...This is how you write a superpowers story! No unnecessary goody two shoes, no unbelievable evil guy choices, just a super powered being struggling to survive in a society that is slowly turning into a super powered one. Good job, man, or lady. Good job.

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Diamond_Shatterer
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Unique and interesting storyline. From the start of the story, the reader is at the edge of their seats wondering what will happen next. Keep up the good work.

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The story is smooth because of the quality that this books gives. It barely has any mistakes in the book, and the plot is very gripping and fun.

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Reveal spoiler

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Jesse_Ihuka
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Great book overall. Leaves alot to be desired if you read the original story. I do actually love the character development, but it was a little less detailed than the first storyline

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Amazing! Very intense from the start. The world background is so intriguing and fascinating that you’re hooked from the get go. And the words come together to create such a beautiful tale. Amazing.

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