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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv42yr
2022-04-13 14:47

The chapters are really long, like really2x long. Praise be the book cover! I like it. Anyways, the author was good at choosing words and it was like a play. I must say that the mastery of the language is one of his perks. I can see that the narration was smooth. I like it ❤️ Hope you can make the chapters thinner like 1.5k words as an average per chap haha 😂 Anyways, still up to you. The readers need a short break per chap too ❤️

The Superpower System

Knossos
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1 Chs

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

Review swap?

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BlueJuice_Man
BlueJuice_ManLv3

wow what a story! this book is so unique and I have loved reading it so much! everyone should at least try reading this bc of how smooth the reading experience is(:

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Venusean
VenuseanLv2

I always appreciate a smooth writing experience as aided by the author's skill and this is one of those. The grammar has so far been flawless and other than some very very very slight formatting mistakes that were corrected by the author, I have not picked up any flaw in the writing quality. Plot is interesting and has a lot of potential. The character(s)is well-written and developped. The world background hasn't been brought up too much yet but I predict it will also be 5 stars from me. Good work, keep it up!

3yr
ObamaUchiha
ObamaUchihaLv4

please update again.... even just once a month is good even ever 2 months just please. .......................................................

3yr
Lutheris_right
Lutheris_rightLv2

Now this...This is how you write a superpowers story! No unnecessary goody two shoes, no unbelievable evil guy choices, just a super powered being struggling to survive in a society that is slowly turning into a super powered one. Good job, man, or lady. Good job.

3yr
Diamond_Shatterer
Diamond_ShattererLv2

Unique and interesting storyline. From the start of the story, the reader is at the edge of their seats wondering what will happen next. Keep up the good work.

2yr
GMSJakers
GMSJakersLv1

The story is smooth because of the quality that this books gives. It barely has any mistakes in the book, and the plot is very gripping and fun.

2yr
Random_Entity
Random_EntityLv4

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Jesse_Ihuka
Jesse_IhukaLv1

Great book overall. Leaves alot to be desired if you read the original story. I do actually love the character development, but it was a little less detailed than the first storyline

2yr
TofSpades
TofSpadesLv3

Amazing! Very intense from the start. The world background is so intriguing and fascinating that you’re hooked from the get go. And the words come together to create such a beautiful tale. Amazing.

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