Review Detail of Mayemura in The Mafia Game ( Hired Gun )

This is a very good story. I love how you give a detailed description of your characters and setting .However, I rated it 4.8 because of the errors . The tenses mix-up cause the grammar to be erratic. Please correct that and this will be a very catchy story. With that being said, overall you have great potential and I am going to be reading this story too. Already in my library 😃. I know that I want to journey with Ava to the end