Interesting, but style and grammar are not the author's forte. His writing style is all over the place, falling prey to traps like "But that's a story for another time." Also, the main character doesn't seem to behave like a wise sage would.
NotStupidReader
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LIKEConfusing verb tenses, changing from formal to informal speech, suddenly interacting with the readers, etc.
NotStupidReader:Well, thanks for the honest review. Anyway, can you elaborate more about 'all over the place?'
I see… I know my writing style is a mess. Still, the informal part is intentional, man. Thank you for your reminders anyway.
Rey_G:Confusing verb tenses, changing from formal to informal speech, suddenly interacting with the readers, etc.