Review Detail of ZoneTail in Madara Uchiha With The Omniverse System First World: One Piece
Review detail
▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆○ - not really 4, but I will give 4☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆○○ - too fast. the lack of context makes the story boring. ▪︎Character Design...........☆○○○○ - huge disappointment on the character Design. the mc was reincarnated as Luffy, because of the system he end up looking like Madara. - so the mc's name is luffy with madara's body who can transform into a dragon(sigh) + 5 elements. (you could have at least change his name or just make an oc mc, but no imma be luffy and the same time looks like madara) ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆○ 《Overall 3.2》
Madara Uchiha With The Omniverse System First World: One Piece
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Also, you're right about finding fics in WN because of boredom lol. I occasionally browse here for wish fulfillment because I ran out of fics to read @_@
Great_Young_Master:What did you really expect? It's a story with "Multiverse" written as part of the title. The character development will be trash as there'll be no character development. This site many of these "______ Multiverse system" or whatever. Even if the character development is not trash but authors with stories like this always make their stories too long than what it should be thus readers dropped the said story. It's all a repeat, people who've read enough in this site knows this and they pretty only read stories like this if they're REALLY bored, and the only people that care for it are people who are new to the genre and eventually they too will realize how these stories goes.
What did you really expect? It's a story with "Multiverse" written as part of the title. The character development will be trash as there'll be no character development. This site many of these "______ Multiverse system" or whatever. Even if the character development is not trash but authors with stories like this always make their stories too long than what it should be thus readers dropped the said story. It's all a repeat, people who've read enough in this site knows this and they pretty only read stories like this if they're REALLY bored, and the only people that care for it are people who are new to the genre and eventually they too will realize how these stories goes.
Great_Young_Master:What did you really expect? It's a story with "Multiverse" written as part of the title. The character development will be trash as there'll be no character development. This site many of these "______ Multiverse system" or whatever. Even if the character development is not trash but authors with stories like this always make their stories too long than what it should be thus readers dropped the said story. It's all a repeat, people who've read enough in this site knows this and they pretty only read stories like this if they're REALLY bored, and the only people that care for it are people who are new to the genre and eventually they too will realize how these stories goes.
You will probably not understand, and this might sound nonsensical without context, but thank you for letting me see a flaw I often go through.
Great_Young_Master:What did you really expect? It's a story with "Multiverse" written as part of the title. The character development will be trash as there'll be no character development. This site many of these "______ Multiverse system" or whatever. Even if the character development is not trash but authors with stories like this always make their stories too long than what it should be thus readers dropped the said story. It's all a repeat, people who've read enough in this site knows this and they pretty only read stories like this if they're REALLY bored, and the only people that care for it are people who are new to the genre and eventually they too will realize how these stories goes.
Great_Young_Master:What did you really expect? It's a story with "Multiverse" written as part of the title. The character development will be trash as there'll be no character development. This site many of these "______ Multiverse system" or whatever. Even if the character development is not trash but authors with stories like this always make their stories too long than what it should be thus readers dropped the said story. It's all a repeat, people who've read enough in this site knows this and they pretty only read stories like this if they're REALLY bored, and the only people that care for it are people who are new to the genre and eventually they too will realize how these stories goes.
