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AngelsCreed
AngelsCreedLv133yr
2021-08-10 01:03

I don’t know if anyone else noticed this but everytime a definition (ability/weapon) was given was straight copy paste from wiki. Just overall disrespect for original characters plus making them all girls threw me off. Zoro was completely ignored, God Usopp is dead, Sanji doesnt exist and thats all within 10 chapters. This story might have turned out better if the author put more effort into making his own OC and story line. Also single FL is preferred, max 2. This MC has 5 already within 10 chapters. Just doesn’t seem like there Will be any charactEr deVelopment ever

Madara Uchiha With The Omniverse System First World: One Piece

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ZoneTail
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▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆○ - not really 4, but I will give 4☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆○○ - too fast. the lack of context makes the story boring. ▪︎Character Design...........☆○○○○ - huge disappointment on the character Design. the mc was reincarnated as Luffy, because of the system he end up looking like Madara. - so the mc's name is luffy with madara's body who can transform into a dragon(sigh) + 5 elements. (you could have at least change his name or just make an oc mc, but no imma be luffy and the same time looks like madara) ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆○ 《Overall 3.2》

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Your_host_HK
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[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Just trying to improve my ratings.

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Spike009
Spike009Lv4

A very good novel. And Author has kept it interesting so far. Which is what some novels are unable to do. For now the world is one piece. And it’s been written well.

3yr
I_am_inevitable
I_am_inevitableLv14

It's just your average wishes/reincarnation novel nothing special.

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Mehmehmeh
MehmehmehLv15

This story bland and boring The MC is a arrogant young master beta male virgin character type, those should never be mixed together let alone be a MC. .........i could probably type a lot more but these are the major problems with this book and i don’t want to waste anymore time on this, it’s just not worth it.

3yr
Golias
GoliasLv5

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Retro_
Retro_Lv3

I don't give many harsh ratings but I will give to this book. Mc is what u will call a young master type mc who likes to be toxic and loves collecting girls... He is luffy but with Madara's body, Author could have just made him an Oc but no he soes not eant to create his own plot so makes him luffy. This in other words is a typical fan-fic of this site which is not worth reading in my opinion.

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Shaska
ShaskaLv3

I feel that many times the ones that give 5 stars are multi-accounts or bots... ...........................................................................

3yr
grigrait
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VEYN
VEYNLv2

Интересно, жду продолжение...................................................................................................................

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