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2021-06-05 23:36

Just a first chapter and I could already feel your good writing skills. The book is well written. A journey of little boy who is thrown in to unfamiliar environment and in between harsh reality and tough situation. Will he survived this harsh situation on his own? How he fall in to such a situation? All the answers are in the book give it a try and read it I'm sure you will love it. Writing quality: the author has very good writing skills. You can feel it just by reading first chap. Updating stability: as far I have seen writer is updating book on regular basis. Story development: the story is starting when the boy - our male lead is just 6 years sold. As story continue we can experience his journey with him. Character design: There are many different characters as story develope and all of them were done nicely. And at the end best part of story is world background. ; Write has creat fictional fantasy world. All the details were mentioned that needed to mention to understand everything properly. In my words story is one of the finest and Atleast deserve one chance.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Thank you so much for your thorough and insightful review!

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