Item: Timeless Celestial's Odyssey
Rating: 5
Author: Mayank_Kansal

Mayank_KansalLv13yr

2021-06-03 19:29

Trying my best to be critical here, the faults are much more hidden and the discrepancies are hard to notice. The main character's personality is not clearly shown, though that can be attributed to the fact that he's a kid, it can still be improved. Good luck author-san~

Timeless Celestial's Odyssey

Apprentice4

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The perspective change might seem harrowing at first to some readers but it would get better with time if you keep on reading. It's been quite some time since I've been working on this, so I'll really appreciate if you could give it a chance. Any queries, suggestions, hate, and disgust can be directed here in the replies.

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