The writing quality is ok without major problems, it is expected of an amateur writer, with time it should improve and make the story more involving. But one mistake that I cannot pass up is that the author mistaken the name of the U.A. I don't know how someone manages to end up writing the pronunciation in Japanese (yuei) instead of the correct name. For God's sake, if you're like U.A. in anime and manga, so it's U.A. and not yuei. Even on the yuei wiki it's in parentheses next to the correct name. Update stability is not very good. Of course, the author released a good number of chapters in a short time, but it was much more random, I would prefer that he had a release schedule of 2 chapters per day instead of releasing 3 in one day, 2 the next day and none next. Story Development is average, it's fast and nothing too special, but still interesting, but nothing that comes close to some of the more elaborate fanfics we see out there. Character Design is where this fnafic fails, the secondary characters' personality is weak (something common in fanfics) what is quite unacceptable is that the mc's personality doesn't look at all like that of a sukuna, it would probably be better if the mc were someone reincarnated with the powers of the sukuna instead of this flawed version of the sukuna. The World Background is also average and expected from a fanfic of this level, good enough for those who watched BNH but not enough for those who only watched jujustu to enjoy the story.
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