Though, I already stopped reading, but I felt like I should put a review in case author decides to go through his reviews and see what he might need to work on when writing another book. First of, I say 5 star for update becaue I dont know about the update stability and there is already over 800 chapters. Every other aspects lacks so badly, the ghost design was written really properly. I mean he is a ghost but cannot see in the dark with or without a physic body. Him getting ambushed in dark by monsters/spirit like being or what that was in the first 40 chapters is weird. Cant remember all the reason why I stopped reading this as it has been a while but the writing skill about a ghost as a main charater needs massive improvement. What I do think is that author is wrote the character using the traits of a human instead of a ghost. Anyway, goodluck to you improving, I'm not criticizing here but I'm stating what I feel it lacked. I dont know of chapters past the 50s, so there might have been improvement. Thank you .
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