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UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv122yr
2022-10-14 18:37

You gotta be a special type of stupid to create a novel about "GHOSTS" but have him in a human form most of the time. The amount of failure that you have to pull just to screw up your whole novel by not even making use of the name... Like I get that you didn't want to write a good novel, but you didn't have to make it almost as terrible as those novels where the mc turns into something else but hates it so he instantly ruins it by getting a human form, Wait that's exactly what you've done here, you made a failure of a novel and now you use a human form because you had no idea how to write a novel about a ghost. Great job author, I try to be respectful to most authors but you just don't deserve it because you ruin your novel, make the readers wait through your terrible plot, and somehow find a way to ruin a topic that isn't really written about thus giving you so many different ways to write it. So for anyone wanting to read this, you might as well look for a different novel about a danny phantom at this point. I don't think many people here even read 1 chapter since this novel got the deserved 4.09 stars(Minus the 1 star I'm giving you) so for any of those poor fools thinking about reading this, don't.

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Quiescent_Rumble
Quiescent_RumbleLv4

I'd like an option to automatically downvote and hide all reviews with stupid pictures inside.

UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

I’d like to be able to block idiots but here you are, commenting on an old review.

Quiescent_Rumble:I'd like an option to automatically downvote and hide all reviews with stupid pictures inside.
Quiescent_Rumble
Quiescent_RumbleLv4

Your post points to a real problem with your intelligence. It should at least border on you being mentally handicapped.I don't even know how to answer because your attack is so stupid, reasoning would not work.Answering to something, which was not written recently, is wrong?How old are you?

UndeadBeing:I’d like to be able to block idiots but here you are, commenting on an old review.
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

My post points out A. The identifying quality(name) of this novel says he’s a ghost. But here’s the problem, the ghost part is basically thrown away. Would that not ruin a novel? Would you read novel that said it’s be a nonhuman mc, but the mc stayed as a human the entire time? And B. half of the reason you came to read the novel is a lie. Even the synopsis doesn’t tell the truth. It says a ghost mc but he’s predominantly a human. It’s not hard to wrap your feeble mind around the fact that both the title and the synopsis are lies. Do you think I should support a novel that tricked me into reading it and then reveals the lie for an easy human mc novel? Do you think I should read a romance novel where the mc stays single and is distant to everyone around him? Where does my post have such stupidity that you didn’t even point out in your reply. You merely insulted me, when I replied you said that my post was stupid yet said nothing about the reason. Either stop trying or tell me what about not wanting to read a novel that isn’t exactly what the synopsis and name said it was? I still wish I could block idiots like you, wouldn’t have to waste time trying to make a stupid person figure out he’s an idiot.

Quiescent_Rumble:Your post points to a real problem with your intelligence. It should at least border on you being mentally handicapped.I don't even know how to answer because your attack is so stupid, reasoning would not work.Answering to something, which was not written recently, is wrong?How old are you?
Cyrus_Umali
Cyrus_UmaliLv2

ah youu poor thing, you must really have such terrible life . here's some cookiess 🍪🍪

UndeadBeing:My post points out A. The identifying quality(name) of this novel says he’s a ghost. But here’s the problem, the ghost part is basically thrown away. Would that not ruin a novel? Would you read novel that said it’s be a nonhuman mc, but the mc stayed as a human the entire time? And B. half of the reason you came to read the novel is a lie. Even the synopsis doesn’t tell the truth. It says a ghost mc but he’s predominantly a human. It’s not hard to wrap your feeble mind around the fact that both the title and the synopsis are lies. Do you think I should support a novel that tricked me into reading it and then reveals the lie for an easy human mc novel? Do you think I should read a romance novel where the mc stays single and is distant to everyone around him? Where does my post have such stupidity that you didn’t even point out in your reply. You merely insulted me, when I replied you said that my post was stupid yet said nothing about the reason. Either stop trying or tell me what about not wanting to read a novel that isn’t exactly what the synopsis and name said it was? I still wish I could block idiots like you, wouldn’t have to waste time trying to make a stupid person figure out he’s an idiot.
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A very good premise at the start. The world building and update stability are quite good, but I have to admit that I find the character design and story development severely lacking. The MC is naive to the point of stupidity up to chapter 100. He gets conned and betrayed to easily imo, not to mention the constant repeat mistakes. He talks to himself 80% of the time, and half of that is to remind himself not to repeat past mistakes. Yet, a few chapters later, he will be berating himself again that he is stupid and repeating his errors. The MC can be borderline stupid, but blatantly saying and repeating how stupid the MC is every 10 or so chapters, does not bode well for the book. At least make him seem smart is what I'm trying to say. The story development was fine, even when he was masquerading as a woman for 70% of it (sweat) 😰. But, that bomb drop at chapter 99 was too huge! I will be honest, I couldn't really tell who the target audience was for half the book. But it was interesting enough to stop me from investigating. The reason for this is quite simple, 99% of male audience can read novels about male MCs turning into animals, insects, ghosts etc. But to have them transgender is a huge taboo. I understand that it's 2022 and the lines are somewhat blurred nowadays. But, if you are writing a novel targeted at MALE audience, you SHOULD NOT transgender the MALE MC and LITERALLY put that he lost himself. It's too much, my brother. I literally had to back pedal at chapter 99 and check if this novel had an LGBTQ tag that I somehow missed. I even had to question myself and ask if I was being misguided for reading those 99 chapters. That's just how big an impact your chapter 99 had on me. I don't think that the sequence of events leading up to it were intentional, but the end result was questionable to say the least. At least, that's my two cents on those two issues. Otherwise, the book is readable and I would recommend it to female readers, or those who don't mind the blurred lines. Overall, I give this book 3.8 out of 5 but that's mainly for the writing quality, world building, and the somewhat unconventional plot. The MC setting and plot progression seems quite sketchy imo though. P.S. Please allow the MC to do ghostly things. You promised ghosts, so you should give ghosts.

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