Review Detail of SkyNeves in Lightning and Fire Given Form(REPOSTED)

I haven't gotten to the latest chapter yet but I feel that after more than 90 chapters read I can review this book... I hope it doesn't go down hill after the 90 chapters😅. LETS REVIEW THIS B***H! 1-Writing Quality: It has a good writing quality, there's a difference between good and great. Anyway it's well written but it still has grammar mistakes and some misspelled words like fiancee becoming finance and I actually laughed the first time I read it because Raynare said "He's our finance." and I immediately thought it meant he was the sugar daddy since he's investing on them. Anyway it's well written but has some mistakes. [4 Stars Here] 2-Story Development: Oh My GOD!!! The plot feels so good, I was kind of annoyed when it got a crossover with PJ's world but it made sense because the author mixed it so well you could actually picture it being originally the same universe. With so many deities it'd be wrong to assume there aren't any half deities. [5 Stars Here] 3-Character Design: Well s**t here we go again. The characters are well designed, when their personalities change it's a slow progress and not a random thing, also the characters have depth to them as you can actually smile sometimes with their interactions and I don't mean cringing at the obvious cringe stuff😂. [5 Stars Here] 4-Updating Stability: B***h it's stable as Oxigen on the atmosphere. I added the book today(18/01/2022) and I already got an update. [Take some more 5 Stars Author] 5-World Background: The world has details, we get descriptions of scenes and there's no plot holes in each races societies. The best part is that the descriptions do not feel like info dump because of the fluidity and the feel of how the info is introduced. [Oh take the stars and leave 5 Stars Here] Overall: 4.8 it'd be more than 5 if the other ratings could be increased. Personal Opinion: To new readers who want a harem (there's a tag and if you're a #noharem person that's fine but you should leave now) that doesn't seem forced and has a nice pace to getting girls that isn't basic pokemon capturing give it a 5 chapter read at least.