It definitely has potential, it kept me intrigued enough to keep going which is good, though I admit I had to adjust at first when I noticed recurring errors, eventually I was able to interpret what was meant and it became an easy read. Wasn't even sure what direction the story would go, since I normally don't read this specific genre, but I honestly still enjoyed it, keep it going!
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