Review Detail of Freylingo in Mistress Of Enchanting Dragon

It's a great story, fun and easy to read since there is beauty in simplicity, nonetheless, I don't think you sorta failed to deliver the story as a reader that is great. I like how the MC is generous and sophisticated. Tho just friendly advice try to reduce repeated words to describe the same thing, use a bit strong verbs and lessen your adverbs and lastly add a cliffhanger at the end of every chapter. I'm rooting for you, good luck.