This is good. I've always loved royalty themed story so it is easy to be immersed in this. I hope it gets better because I could already feel the looming danger in the next chaps. Aside from some sentence structures and grammar errors, I really saw its potential especially that the world building is constructed well and not to forget that there's some mysteries to look forward to. Kudos, author!
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