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From the very beginning, the story is intriguing, the characters are expressive. You don't struggle with grammar, style, or tenses, so it's nice to read it. Well done! Good luck with the contest!

This is an enjoyable and thrilling story. The writing quality is great. I like the pacing of the story. The chase scenes are great., The MC is lovable., Great job, author! Definitely gonna keep this in my collection., :)

this is honestly one of the best books that I have read on webnovel. I love the characters and how they grow throughout the book. the whole concept of this story as well as the world building is personally very intriguing to me.

So far, I gotta say it started off quite well. I mean I didn't get borde within the beginning chapters, but instead became more intrigued as the plot progressed. everything else is also good. There are rarely if not any grammar mistakes or misspelled words and even if there are the author is quick to fix them if you point them out, which is a point in my book. It shows the dedication and passion of the author since he's willing to quick fix any mistake pointed out to him, unlike some other authors who just ignore it or say when I do a rewrite. Over all I rate this book a 5/5 so far. But if it goes downhill later on then I'll retrack my 5 star rating and reassigne a different rating of it then.

i cant say that its slow start but its progressing really well. you easily get attached with tess. what made me read this is about the forbidden romance tag. lol. anyway. this is 3rd person pov so i like it. cant handle 1st person pov. keep it up.

The cover and synopsis had me excited. The plot is very interesting. It's a well written story. Th world building and dialogues are really well done. I found the start a bit confusing but as I continued reading things become clearer. I really liked it, and would like to recommend others to read it!

Super Work. The characters, the writing quality, and the story development... great. And it has great potential, especially in the author's hand. but i still advice to work on synopsis a bit that will attract more readers. You're doing an excellent job, keep it up. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

It's really an amazing story with an unique style of writing. It's really interesting. Sorry I couldn't read much but I will read it once you finished writing. I am inspired by your work! Kept it up dear author! Best of luck!