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Review Detail of SHIVAM_Chouksey in Snake Evolution System [ Legend Of Hebi]

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SHIVAM_Chouksey
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Hello, guys, your dear author is here, I just wanted to say that my English is not good because English is not my first language, but I am trying very hard to improve myself, please keep loving and keep supporting my work.

Snake Evolution System [ Legend Of Hebi]

SHIVAM_Chouksey

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Deepak_Ghosh
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Shivam bhai,I like korean fantasy novel and I like this type of story where MC is a monster..you are doing good,keep up the good work..also can you introduce our indian culture in novel.like how korean and japanese like to share there culture to the world through novel and anime

TheNUT
TheNUTLv13TheNUT

is there a harem and if so how many are going to be in it?

strangetrain516
strangetrain516Lv15strangetrain516

I'm not expert at English but I think your doing pretty good if it is your second language

DaoistFQOf3F
DaoistFQOf3FLv1DaoistFQOf3F

well my english is bad even though it is my third language

Red_dragon
Red_dragonLv15Red_dragon

Did you get the cultivation realms from “dual cultivation” or no because there the same

SHIVAM_Chouksey
SHIVAM_ChoukseyAuthorSHIVAM_Chouksey

biklul bhai... main apni taraf se poori koshis krunga. thank-you

Deepak_Ghosh:Shivam bhai,I like korean fantasy novel and I like this type of story where MC is a monster..you are doing good,keep up the good work..also can you introduce our indian culture in novel.like how korean and japanese like to share there culture to the world through novel and anime
6VirginAnon9
6VirginAnon9Lv16VirginAnon9

R18 or not

21man
21manLv1521man

what you discord code the other one expired

I_am_Novel_Lover
I_am_Novel_LoverLv3I_am_Novel_Lover

It's my first time reading a Novel, where MC is from India. I will support this novel.

Empyrium
EmpyriumLv15Empyrium

You should work on your grammar or search for someone on discord maybe to proof read your chapters, there are a lot of tiny mistakes which are really annoying

WISEDRAGON
WISEDRAGONLv6WISEDRAGON

Desi boys on the web ! Yey 😆

SHIVAM_Chouksey
SHIVAM_ChoukseyAuthorSHIVAM_Chouksey

ohhh bhai [img=exp][img=recommend]

WISEDRAGON:Desi boys on the web ! Yey 😆
SINU
SINULv11SINU

लगे रहो भाई हम भारतीय आपके साथ है आप हमारे गौरवशाली भाई हैं (मैं भी इसे आपकी तरह करना चाहता हूं लेकिन हमारे पास हमारी संस्कृति के प्रति उतनी रचनात्मकता नहीं थी, इसलिए मैं आपके साथ रहूंगा इसका लाभ उठाएं) जय हिन्द

SHIVAM_Chouksey:biklul bhai... main apni taraf se poori koshis krunga. thank-you
last_dragon
last_dragonLv4last_dragon

grammarly use karo bhai usse kaam ho jayega

Kido_TO
Kido_TOLv4Kido_TO

I was attracted by your pfp can you tell me will mc have super Saiyan like powers?

SHIVAM_Chouksey
SHIVAM_ChoukseyAuthorSHIVAM_Chouksey

Lol...yes

Kido_TO:I was attracted by your pfp can you tell me will mc have super Saiyan like powers?
kazenokami
kazenokamiLv5kazenokami

I'm curious does this novel have any KHR elements based on the novel picture

Daoist271858
Daoist271858Lv12Daoist271858

Kind of had a stroke reading the synopsis, someone should fix that god awful grammer

Dfly81
Dfly81Lv15Dfly81

there's no shame in getting a editor to help with English grammar

Villain116
Villain116Lv3Villain116

Good luck and I hope u write about Indian mythology but in different style.