dear author I'm going to be honest with you I really like the story development and even the fact that you let your readers create the image of your main character can be overlooked but. . . you should seriously think about stopping the releases for a while and fix the already posted chapters because at the start your grammar mistakes were bearable but instead of improving you worsened the quality of your writing. . . I have to literally guess what you were trying to say in certain lines and you often use wrong words if you use autocorrect turn it off and if you're not using it then turn it on I don't know what to say. . . aside from that you have poor description of the world background like you only say that the place is really beautiful, there are some ruins, a forest and that's it dude turn on your imagination if not just the readers for some pointers this app is not just for posting chapters also the character development is too fast like in just 10 short chapters the main character is akin to a boss also you haven't described the characters at all aside from the small details like their hair length, hair color, eye color and their gender and instead of describing their cloths you always use robes. . . you can't fool us😅 I honestly don't want to drop this book because it has potential just work on it and your writing.
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