Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in Deception: A trap in every step.

It is a cool concept! The story has a lot to offer. I think as the novel progresses, the mysteries and questions left in the first few chapters would have answers to them. There is one thing that I'd like to point out and it is the "Showing" technique compared from telling. There are few instances from here and there that "told" readers, but did not share it. If you can add more showing scenes, that would be fantastic! Feel free to disagree~ Kudos for the author!