webnovel
avatar

Review Detail of Elarn in Ascend

Review detail

Elarn
ElarnLv121yrElarn

I actually really loved this. There was no cheating, no wavering, no complicated triangles. I really liked how simple it was and how 'fateful' it turned out. Really well done that way. The main characters also had some nice growth. The problem I had was all the loose ends. It really stopped me from feeling totally fulfilled at the end. The couple of things I had issue with was: the two main characters never call each other boyfriends. Ever. They also never say truly in words that they're dating. It's all speculated. The second thing is the major secondary characters don't feel finished. I ended the story saying '...and then? What the heck do you mean this is the end?!' which is totally not satisfying. Never know what happened to them. It just.... stops right in the middle of their arc. The third thing was that the main characters mother was left alone. The story involving her. She was the main reason the main character couldn't do what he wanted. Ok. Fine. But what happens when she finds out? What the heck was her reaction? How did Mu handle it? Come on!!! Otherwise, I'm seriously glad I read it.

altalt

Ascend

xuanzhe

Liked it!

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!