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Elarn

Elarn

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2018-12-12 JoinedGlobal
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  • Elarn
    Elarn1yr
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    I actually really loved this. There was no cheating, no wavering, no complicated triangles. I really liked how simple it was and how 'fateful' it turned out. Really well done that way. The main characters also had some nice growth. The problem I had was all the loose ends. It really stopped me from feeling totally fulfilled at the end. The couple of things I had issue with was: the two main characters never call each other boyfriends. Ever. They also never say truly in words that they're dating. It's all speculated. The second thing is the major secondary characters don't feel finished. I ended the story saying '...and then? What the heck do you mean this is the end?!' which is totally not satisfying. Never know what happened to them. It just.... stops right in the middle of their arc. The third thing was that the main characters mother was left alone. The story involving her. She was the main reason the main character couldn't do what he wanted. Ok. Fine. But what happens when she finds out? What the heck was her reaction? How did Mu handle it? Come on!!! Otherwise, I'm seriously glad I read it.

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  • Elarn
    Elarn2yr
    Replied to Andru_9788

    I adore you!!! Favoritest author EVER â™„â€đŸ˜đŸ’•đŸ’™đŸ’–

    Ch 26 Romantic Scene
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  • Elarn
    Elarn2yr
    Commented

    This is going to be torture to wait for each chapter! Hope you're doing well! Really appreciate your work.

    Ch 26 Romantic Scene
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  • Elarn
    Elarn2yr
    Commented

    Added long ago to my library! Can't wait for the two to reunite. Not the father and the ex-wife... that sounds like dog blood. What's more is it's rotten dog blood which I have quite enough of in real life. That girly- girl third wheel needs to scurry along by. Sorry! He's already taken!

    Ch 20 Ex-Wife
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  • Elarn
    Elarn2yr
    Commented

    Wonderful as always! :) You do such good work.

    Ch 10 Chapter 9
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  • Elarn
    Elarn2yr
    Commented

    Already hooked! I was wondering if you'd start a new one. Thank goodness you did! 🙏 I'll be reading this as usual. :)

    Ch 4 Chapter 3
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  • Elarn
    Elarn2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 552 Awwww
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  • Elarn
    Elarn2yr
    Commented

    Get well soon!

    Ch 550 Servicing The CEO Under The Desk
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  • Elarn
    Elarn2yr
    Commented

    Mom's be evil.... GO MOM'S!!

    Ch 543 L-Word,Yeah
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  • Elarn
    Elarn2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 535 Sweet Delicious Fluff
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  • Elarn
    Elarn2yr
    Commented

    Absolute BURN!! You go Ran-ge!

    Ch 533 Faceslapping Season Two
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  • Elarn
    Elarn2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

    Ch 524 Confession Time
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  • Elarn
    Elarn2yr
    Commented

    Lighting a candle! Hmm, maybe a candelabra would be more appropriate. Seems we have several who are wishing for death. Hehe

    Ch 523 Pettiness At A Whole New Level
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  • Elarn
    Elarn2yr
    Commented

    Another correction for you! :) It's " Scalded" instead of "scolded". The first is being burned by hot liquid and the second is being reprimanded by someone. Evil person with the evil cliffhanger! I'll just be me over here throwing a tantrum like a 2 year old until tomorrow! 😜

    Ch 515 Meeting The In Law
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  • Elarn
    Elarn2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

    Ch 511 A Dash Of NSFW
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  • Elarn
    Elarn2yr
    Commented

    I want Danzhe as my brother!!! He's so freaking awesome! 😍

    Ch 501 Drunk Tattoo
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  • Elarn
    Elarn2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

    Ch 499 How To Ruin A Blind Date
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  • Elarn
    Elarn2yr
    Commented

    Can't stand poor Wen in so much angst for so long but the face slapping will be epic!!!

    Ch 497 Never Provoke A Kept Man
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  • Elarn
    Elarn2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 491 Mama Bear Wen
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  • Elarn
    Elarn2yr
    Commented

    This is the only story I have found worthy to spend my money on! You have an amazing talent. đŸ‘â€ I will for sure be reading all of your other books. The growth I have witness in YOU has been wonderful. Not just your characters. Your writing style has improved a lot. Keep up the great work!

    Ch 475 Fifth World: Flaunting Their Love Like An Instagram couple
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