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I actually really loved this. There was no cheating, no wavering, no complicated triangles. I really liked how simple it was and how 'fateful' it turned out. Really well done that way. The main characters also had some nice growth. The problem I had was all the loose ends. It really stopped me from feeling totally fulfilled at the end. The couple of things I had issue with was: the two main characters never call each other boyfriends. Ever. They also never say truly in words that they're dating. It's all speculated. The second thing is the major secondary characters don't feel finished. I ended the story saying '...and then? What the heck do you mean this is the end?!' which is totally not satisfying. Never know what happened to them. It just.... stops right in the middle of their arc. The third thing was that the main characters mother was left alone. The story involving her. She was the main reason the main character couldn't do what he wanted. Ok. Fine. But what happens when she finds out? What the heck was her reaction? How did Mu handle it? Come on!!! Otherwise, I'm seriously glad I read it.
Added long ago to my library! Can't wait for the two to reunite. Not the father and the ex-wife... that sounds like dog blood. What's more is it's rotten dog blood which I have quite enough of in real life. That girly- girl third wheel needs to scurry along by. Sorry! He's already taken!
Another correction for you! :) It's " Scalded" instead of "scolded". The first is being burned by hot liquid and the second is being reprimanded by someone. Evil person with the evil cliffhanger! I'll just be me over here throwing a tantrum like a 2 year old until tomorrow! đ
This is the only story I have found worthy to spend my money on! You have an amazing talent. đ†I will for sure be reading all of your other books. The growth I have witness in YOU has been wonderful. Not just your characters. Your writing style has improved a lot. Keep up the great work!