I just started this story. It’s not bad so far. I do like it. BUT, i do hope the creator pays just a little more attention to the art. chapter 9 shows the main guy grabbing the bad mans left wrist. Unfortunately, between each frame things change. goes from holding the left wrist, to holding nothing, back to holding the left wrist, back to holding nothing, then again with holding the left wrist. At the end of the chapter the bad guys right wrist is in his pocket hurting! Art is good, I like it. story is good so far. I just hope The artist pays a little closer attention to those kinds of details further on!
