nice....this story has potential.. .

I just started this story. It’s not bad so far. I do like it. BUT, i do hope the creator pays just a little more attention to the art. chapter 9 shows the main guy grabbing the bad mans left wrist. Unfortunately, between each frame things change. goes from holding the left wrist, to holding nothing, back to holding the left wrist, back to holding nothing, then again with holding the left wrist. At the end of the chapter the bad guys right wrist is in his pocket hurting! Art is good, I like it. story is good so far. I just hope The artist pays a little closer attention to those kinds of details further on!

good story i like op characters .......................................................................... .................................

The only good thing is the story development. Drawing of characters is badly made in me option and I don't like the Mc's character. So I think I will drop this

This is stupid, really, the MC has the power where he can see through walls, night vision and teleporting and he uses none of those when he truly need it and he doesn’t even workout. he’s to reliant to the power given by the system (by power I mean increase in str, agi etc.) He can become much stronger if he workouts and practice his ability but no, he’s too simp for that. This is just too infuriating for me too read. Bye.

some chapters have low quality images. please improve those chapters.

The art isn’t the best but you can see improvement in the art after about 30 chapters and after 100, the quality in art is on par with multi-artist comics. The story and character development are where this comic shines. You can see the character growth in power (yes, of course his system is OP but at least it has flaws like needing stones with energy that aren’t easy to find). You also see the foreshadowing of those who may or may not be his enemies. Those who follow the MC (except for 1 ) are doing it because they see the greatness in him. In fact, I think if his “slave” spirit being was given freedom at this moment , they wouldn’t want it. I am really enjoying this comic. It would make a pretty good LN or WN. I can’t wait to see where things go from here.

good vibes. I like the mc a lot.👍❤️❤️❤️ the story is like a magic spell, it pulls you in.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Interesting animation. Good story. Keep going to attain heights.