Review Detail of BlackPhantasm90 in DC: Strongest Gamer

Everything is good but the translation, grammar, sentence structuring, and the burning of brain cells trying to understand the MTL bullcrap hurts. 5 chapters in and I was wanting to "taking a drink of aspirin". Aithor if you believe your work is good then you should take everything, put it into a dumpster, fill it with rocket fuel, set it on fire, and then piss it out. I believe it would then be great because then nobody would be subjected to this crap and could save the mental anguish of other readers. Thank you