everytime*

I know it's not but everything I read this part I think "is that you sasuke?" lol

This is how fanfiction should be.. a creation of the writers vision and not a redoing of Naruto. People are so dumb nowadays thinking the writers should follow the lore of the original series. Having a little lore and more creativity is how writing should be. Great work and if people complain how “Naruto isn’t like this”, or “you don’t understand Naruto”, are just Whitney children that already had a vision of what they wanted but got butthurt when they didn’t get what they wished. Keep writing.

most people that complain are just looking for attention that they don't receive anywhere else. some just have to force their views on others in the harshest way possible. I call it the "hermoine syndrome". if you've watched any HP you'll fully understand.

that was hilarious. definitely a loki sass statement.

idk i just thought it was funny and wanted to be different.

go to ravens. in Canon he was a death eater spy and fanfiction makes things different. plus this is a new sev compared to Canon. it would be to predictable to have him with the snakes. plus sev could be more involved with James and company for the later story. imagine Harry having sev as a family member and Harry not being with the dursleys.

parenting being easy-be ye han regular parenting-fuuuuuuuuuuuu....

the things eaten in toriko should not give you food ideas ma dude.

webnovel tends to delete any comments that have inappropriate wording. I think they can) it shadowbanning or something.

sentencing structure is terrible, storyline even though AU sucks, and the way the character acts is so cringe that if I could, the vote would be in the negatives rather then a VERY generous vote of 2.

the character is such a simp. I'm ganna try and keep reading but the idea to quickly drop this fanfic is near.

in general, they are stupid people that make to many judgements of others and blame others for literally any problems that come up. It is confusing but think of it as a group of people that natural selection hasn't killed off yet.

Everything is good but the translation, grammar, sentence structuring, and the burning of brain cells trying to understand the MTL bullcrap hurts. 5 chapters in and I was wanting to "taking a drink of aspirin". Aithor if you believe your work is good then you should take everything, put it into a dumpster, fill it with rocket fuel, set it on fire, and then piss it out. I believe it would then be great because then nobody would be subjected to this crap and could save the mental anguish of other readers. Thank you

apparently this dude has no idea of toga from mha.

its best to write it down first when fresh then forget when you go to type later on and only remember after submitting everything.

deadpool moment

this was adorable