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Review Detail of TruckkunJr in DC: Strongest Gamer

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TruckkunJr
TruckkunJrLv122yrTruckkunJr

May seem like hating but I'm speaking my point of view. First is the Grammar, it is just simply a monstrosity. You can barely understand what is going off and on several occasions I have lost track of what is happening. The Character design just isn't my kind of taste. He is basically an idiot, emotionless, bland and racist person. I've tried multiple times to connect with the character but I couldn't no matter what. Only the update and Story development is the best about the fanfic. If you can understand it then go ahead, I'm not saying you shouldn't. I've just wanted to give an explanation on my experience with the story.

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Reuben_Sequeira
Reuben_SequeiraLv2Reuben_Sequeira

racism is everywhere,for example in india instead of race people are discriminated in caste or read about rwandan genocide, also chinese treatment of uigyrs,it's just amplified in usa where racism is only between colours or asians

Dizlat_ur:I only hear it in the USA
Lordmoonlight
LordmoonlightLv5Lordmoonlight

kinda hard to read

Herohero
HeroheroLv3Herohero

I agree if the MC was not racist and is the grammar was improving this fanfiction would be a better quality🧐

God_of_Perverts
God_of_PervertsLv5God_of_Perverts

please explain the racist part.

Herohero:I agree if the MC was not racist and is the grammar was improving this fanfiction would be a better quality🧐
HeepyterV17
HeepyterV17Lv3HeepyterV17

Ja... novice...

LordPapayyy
LordPapayyyLv10LordPapayyy

it is difficult to imagine yourself in the place of a character simply because this whole story was written by a Russian. And in the printsapi, the story is normal in Russian, but not here. Pure google translator

Dizlat_ur
Dizlat_urLv3Dizlat_ur

racism is the usa

Herohero:I agree if the MC was not racist and is the grammar was improving this fanfiction would be a better quality🧐
solo_fanfictioning
solo_fanfictioningLv2solo_fanfictioning

no racism is every where

Dizlat_ur:racism is the usa
Dizlat_ur
Dizlat_urLv3Dizlat_ur

I only hear it in the USA

solo_fanfictioning:no racism is every where
vcut
vcutLv4vcut

welp, its everywhere

Dizlat_ur:I only hear it in the USA
Duncan_Morin
Duncan_MorinLv3Duncan_Morin

Yeah that’s the line that is being spoon fed to gullible people. Fact is Canada is equally racist to USA. I doubt there’s even one country that doesn’t have a large amount of racism.

Dizlat_ur:I only hear it in the USA
Dizlat_ur
Dizlat_urLv3Dizlat_ur

I talk about what I see. I've only met racism on TV

Duncan_Morin:Yeah that’s the line that is being spoon fed to gullible people. Fact is Canada is equally racist to USA. I doubt there’s even one country that doesn’t have a large amount of racism.
solo_fanfictioning
solo_fanfictioningLv2solo_fanfictioning

u dumb then what about in japan theres tons of racism there

Dizlat_ur:I only hear it in the USA
Dizlat_ur
Dizlat_urLv3Dizlat_ur

you yourself thought of insulting me?

solo_fanfictioning:u dumb then what about in japan theres tons of racism there
solo_fanfictioning
solo_fanfictioningLv2solo_fanfictioning

yes america isnt the only place with racism

Dizlat_ur:you yourself thought of insulting me?
Dizlat_ur
Dizlat_urLv3Dizlat_ur

Но Америка возвела ее в культ

solo_fanfictioning:yes america isnt the only place with racism
antonio_montenegro
antonio_montenegroLv3antonio_montenegro

the MC is not racist, the system gave him that title alone, the MC kicked a black person because that person was pointing a gun at a girl and the system gave him the title of racist, I don't remember if I kicked him or threw him something, but overall it was a clean arrest (as far as racism goes)

antonio_montenegro
antonio_montenegroLv3antonio_montenegro

As for whether it is difficult to read or not, I have no idea about that as I use google translate to read on these types of pages, and generally the translator corrects if some things are misspelled.

Frog_King
Frog_KingLv2Frog_King

youre an idiot. r u serious?

Dizlat_ur:you yourself thought of insulting me?
Dizlat_ur
Dizlat_urLv3Dizlat_ur

You too?

Frog_King:youre an idiot. r u serious?