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As a Man united fan, first time reading any story related to united, so one plus for me and up till now story feels good, hope this will be good in the future to, one issue i have with this story is when character is speaking please put "" so anyone reading this will know when the character is speaking and when other things are going on
it is said "makings of a beauty" and not "a beauty" both have very different meanings. the former means she is cute right now and will be a beautiful girl in the future while the latter means she is beautiful right now
i'm bad at giving review so for a short review,the story is actually fun,this doesn't have the high iq ml and one who depends on his maid a lot.this is what makes this story good,for example for sometime the maid who does most of work is absent and the ml has to do all the work,comes to know how difficult the job was without her and appreciates her,this all development makes this story fun Now
dragonite and aerodactyl
dragonite and aerodactyl
*his smile grew more wicked
yes please
please make the story faster,while the conditioning was great the story is going too slow,he will have more then one woman afterwards and 12 chapters for one fl is too slow,else expect great things from you author
thanks author,please finish this fanfic at any cost,one of the times when mc who is chinese doesn't think every other country is evil
don't know about plagiarism,as they are completely different and it's not like you are copying directly and just using the same thing,if my memory is correct in the original it was not the "aunt" who taught him fighting but his adopted mother,else they are similar but not same
play the game, never watched the anime
this is what is wrong information,women's soccer team are paid more then men's. there are two contracts they could have,the men's took a contract where they only got paid in bonuses and had no additional benefits,they only get paid when they play while the women took a contract with base salary and all additional benefits like maternity leave,paid even when they are not playing