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Review Detail of ClaisiceLouice in Trusted Fairytale

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ClaisiceLouice
ClaisiceLouiceLv12yrClaisiceLouice

First, the book's synopsis struck me that it would be mainly about family matters, but it is definitely more than that. Second, The main strength of the story for me is the plot and having a relatable male MC, it is cool to have such a character. Third, The book's character design and story development were awesome and well-thought, I love the pacing and progression of the story while keeping some cliff-hangers from time to time. Fourth, the writing quality was good, there were technical and grammatical errors here and there but they can be fixed. However, maybe this is just a personal opinion feel free to disregard it hehe, I would suggest that there would be descriptions of the character's emotions among the dialogues such as their facial expressions, mannerisms, etc. Overall, the story was awesome, can't wait for the next chaps!

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Trusted Fairytale

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Thank you very much and I'm happy that you read the book and that you enjoyed it. Your review was very helpful to me. Thanks for your suggestion and I would try to include that in the next chapter that I will be releasing soon.