This is pretty good. The author's world building is top-notch. Key elements of the sci-fi world are very well described. The author also has good English and writing skills. I'm not a game, sci-fi person, but it's surprising how much I like this. The suits remind me of 'Kiva', a character in "Megas XLR", an old sci-fi show I loved. You can tell right off the bat that the story has great potential. Great job. Keep it up![img=recommend]
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