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otaku / Author of Solaris Imperium / Twitter: @ShonenImpact

2021-05-12 JoinedUnited States
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    Replied to Joel_West

    Thank you so much for the detailed advice on chapter 1. I'm going to revise it so it's not such a firehose of information haha

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    Solaris Imperium
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    Replied to Author_D

    Thank you, I'm going to checkout Megas XLR!

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    Solaris Imperium
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    Replied to star_dreamer

    Hey thank you for the feedback. This is my first work so I really appreciate your advice on reader friendliness.

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    Posted

    Author has a smooth prose style which makes everything flow really well. I liked how much thought went into the origin behind the world building, I really appreciate that kind of detail. Bringing some actual history into it added credibility to the entire story in my opinion. I like that the tone is manages to be somewhat light despite the subject matter. Looking forward to more.

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    By the Power of Plot Armor!
    Sci-fi · Joel_West
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    Posted

    Really enjoyed reading this. Romance is not something I usually read, and this is pretty spicy, but it was really exciting and I quickly found myself engaged and wanting to know more. Tight pacing early means that it gets going quickly. Good editing. I'm a fan.

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    Thirsty Royals
    Fantasy Romance · Author_D
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    Commented

    manga quality sound effects... very nice

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    Posted

    Really good. Well-defined atmosphere and world building. Consistent formatting, solid grammar and spelling. A long running series that has gotten consistent updates. It's very well plotted and paced. There are a lot of reasons to pick this one up.

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    The Devil and the Huntsman
    Fantasy · MicahDarkFantasy
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    funicon1mth
    Replied to knossos

    Thanks! There's a lot more on the way.

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    Posted

    Great writing! The author is clearly a talented prose stylist. This has a professional presentation and is very smooth and easy to read. The story is interesting and I like the attitude of the MC. Looking forward to more.

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    The Superpower System
    Martial Arts · knossos
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    Posted

    There's a lot I liked about this novel. The character descriptions are vivid. This novelist has a real ability to make you "feel" what the characters are experiencing. I thought the plot was entertaining and well-paced as well. The only point off would be in some of the grammar and spelling early on. But for me, that didn't make me enjoy the story any less.

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    The Bloody Angel
    Teen · Theblue_wings
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