I love it, just some grammar problems. Also, I don't understand the main character: in the begening of the novel, she apeared as the bad play girl, now, I mean, I am still in chapter 21, she is sensitive, and more like a cry baby, she wants to protect Jaydan even thought she didn't protect herself. She is complecated. But in general, it's good!
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