Farah_Chnifakh
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Farah_Chnifakh1yrReplied to Grammarlytf- GRAMMARLY I AM A HUGE FAN-
But beneath the normal, lies the abnormal. Crime goes on in the cut-throat streets. People get robed, raped or killed. If you were too weak, you were consumed.- Farah_Chnifakh1yrCommented
wHY tHE fRICK iS tHE mAIN cHARACTER a cRY bABY
"Jayden!" I ran towards him, crying. - Farah_Chnifakh1yrCommented
WHAT4S HIS RELATIONSHIP WITH THESE TWO
"Yes. I promised Luke and Alora. I already talked to grandpa about it. I'll do my duty as a king of Flousia and as a doctor. I won't drop any of it." He said, as if he's really sure about it. - Farah_Chnifakh1yrReplied to Seojun_Lucas
Or worse, they may be related
I was surprised. My father is a Mafia boss? I've never imagined I was related to someone from an underground organization. I looked at Jayden. He was just sitting there and didn't say a word. I know his mom's family is also from an organization. - Farah_Chnifakh1yrCommented
I can smell that she will become the next queen.
My grandfather has been the King of Flousia for almost 60 years. It's been said that he needs to abdicate the throne at the age of 65. The law states that a monarch can rule until the age of 65. After that, they need to pass the crown to their legitimate successor. - Farah_Chnifakh1yrCommented
I guess pig and jaydan are siblings.
"Not really. Just a name. Somehow I heard that surname before, I just can't remember where and when. I'm sure we'll find more in Flousia." He said. - Farah_Chnifakh1yrReplied to Farah_Chnifakh
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I love it, just some grammar problems. Also, I don't understand the main character: in the begening of the novel, she apeared as the bad play girl, now, I mean, I am still in chapter 21, she is sensitive, and more like a cry baby, she wants to protect Jaydan even thought she didn't protect herself. She is complecated. But in general, it's good!
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OMG the fl is a cry baby. Where is the bully peg that we know?
I didn't realize I was already crying. He pulled me into his arms, hugging me tight. - Farah_Chnifakh1yrCommented
WHERE was the kiss exactly, on the lips? on the cheek?
He was calling me but I didn't look back. My heart felt betrayed. Why didn't he push her? Why does it looks like he enjoyed the kiss? Why didn't he introduce me to her as his girlfriend? - Farah_Chnifakh1yrCommented
YOUR MOM... EHHEEM. sory
"Who touched her?" Jayden asked. He was shouting and looks different. - Farah_Chnifakh1yrCommented
Wasn't it Alora?
"Camila!" I yelled and rushed towards her. "Stop it!" - Farah_Chnifakh1yrReplied to LordPineapples
*4! The author said why too.
"Why?" Luke keeps on asking why. I don't even know why. - Farah_Chnifakh1yrCommentedCh 1 Abandon
- Farah_Chnifakh1yrCommentedCh 1 It was an accident
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Fleure means flower in French, Fleurette means a little flower also in French. By the way, I am not from France by any chance 😺
"Why? It suits you more, you look more like a tinny flower to me" - Farah_Chnifakh1yrCommentedCh 2 When we met 3
- Farah_Chnifakh1yrCommentedCh 1 When we met