Mihai_Ionut
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Mihai_Ionut2yrPostedThe story is good, not boring at all, some parts of it were like... Is this really Itachi ? But then I was thinking that 90% of the fan fiction in general who are not OC are like this, no matter how much you know a character, you are not the author of the manga, you don't really know how we would react in that situation, but you've done good bro and with the grammar,i've seen far worse,much worse, but the later chapters you started to improve it,don't listen to the haters, they would hate no matter what.
- Mihai_Ionut2yrCommentedCh 3 Chapter 2
- Mihai_Ionut2yrCommentedCh 2 Chapter 1
- Mihai_Ionut2yrReplied to neobenmike
- Mihai_Ionut2yrCommentedCh 2 Adaptation
- Mihai_Ionut2yrReplied to Izayori_Em
To say something like this about the dxd world :))) c'mon mate
Riser : That doesen't matter at all , we are gonna marry one day , it doesn't matter who you love because one day , you are gonna be mine ( He said with a pervert grin , getting a glare from Itachi ) - Mihai_Ionut2yrReplied to Traps_Are_Gay
I think you got it a little further than you should, why would a kid send assassin's after Itachi ? Everyone would know that it was him and his family, and after ? War in Hell ,they are not so stupid to do that + he is arrogant, he wants to humiliate Itachi on his own, to show him that he is better, this is the kind of person Riser is.
Rias : Let go of me, Raiser! (When he got to the right hallways, a girl voice could be heard, and judging from the tone, she wasn't very happy "Why are you so mean to me!") - Mihai_Ionut2yrCommented
So they grow up together ? How cute is that .
These were Lord Zeoticus Gremory, his wife Venelana Gremory whom originated from the Bael clan, and their daughter that was just as old as Itachi , Rias Gremory the next heir of the Gremory family as her older brother had become the new Lucifer, King of the Underworld. She had a look of curiosity which you would expect from a child, with a hint of excitement. - Mihai_Ionut2yrReplied to ILoveChaos
For me personally not being a native in English, I can still understand because I read in the same way.
After the dinner was ready , Hana and Kenji prepared to leave , until Kenji got a phone call from Lord Zeoticus , telling the to bring their son too , he said it would be a good experience for his daughter to have a friend . At first they were hesitant , they knew that people were curios about Itachi and perhaps in the future become part of their Peerage but Zeoticus told them to not worry , nothing like that would happen , they were always in good terms , his Father was the head of butlers and maids while his mother was the personal maid of Rias mother - Mihai_Ionut2yrReplied to Idk_who_I_am
That's a dope idea
It's been 2 years since i was born . This world is different, more different than I thought , apparently I became a devil , my new home is in the underworld , it was hard at first to understand everything, to adjust to the new lifestyle , and now I think of the old days, when I was a child, in my old world, at this age I would have started the training but now ? Now i live my childhood like a normal child ... well .. not really normal . - Mihai_Ionut2yrCommentedCh 1 Being born again