The whole servant of the gremory, fighting the phenex clan getting exiled, meeting akeno seems gotced why of all countries didhe end up in Japan and so as that he met akeno and sun goku, what about gid skills and training in the earlier chapters theres not much, it seems ur forecfully trying to follow canon, but then whats the benefit of itachi be reincarnated, he doens t have any goals or plans he says he wants to join the army and then what, the planning seems a bit russhed, sorry if i was a bit harsh,but i want you to succeed. Good luck
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